Wednesday, April 4, 2007

jab

jab tak tha dum hum aasmaan dabate chale.....aur jab dum hii nikal gaya..........toh dab gaye apni hii zameen tale

2 comments:

Chakrapani said...

i suggest "pairon tale" in place of "zameen tale" sounds better and suits as well (for the meaning) ... zameen tale dabana kuchh hajam nahi hua yaar :(

Rashmi said...

hmmmm pairon tale wud be quite subjective with someone very paricular hence.....in collective terms i prefered zameen tale...neways thx for ur comments.....