Kuch aap sunaiye, kuch hum sunayenge...aur aise hi mehfillien saj jayengi.
the word "jab" is redundant in both the lines...plz kick it off!!
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuffffffffffff did i got some orders here????? ha ha just kiddin.....well i'll think bout it.....
hey Rashmi,See... m posting a comment.... ;)) Hey yaar aapki shayaris toooo gud hai.... seriously.... really gud ones... :))
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the word "jab" is redundant in both the lines...plz kick it off!!
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuffffffffffff did i got some orders here????? ha ha just kiddin.....well i'll think bout it.....
hey Rashmi,
See... m posting a comment.... ;)) Hey yaar aapki shayaris toooo gud hai.... seriously.... really gud ones... :))
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